Wow its been a while, I didn't really think I would actually submit something else until next year or something crazy like that. Anyway I have a new story its my twist and what the hero was thinking during the final part of the perfect world. I was also thinking about adding fight scene in another chapter, I don't know if its been done to death already but it will be fun writing a battle that should have happened. I don't want to spoil anything but I had a few complaints about the ending with fable 2 especially when you compare it with fable. I'm also thinking about starting a few other projects but I may not have the time. They will either be of my own creation or my version of something so if you already hate the two stories I have written then actually tell me I'm a little curious to ready why.